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The First Time I Saw Her...

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"I first time I saw her, I knew it was love. My heart pounded. My eyes couldn't look away. And I'll love her forever."

~Glacier

Here's Some Info About Glacier If You Are Confused

Glacier is one of my fursonas that I honestly forgot about! ^^;
His bio is here: [link]
As you can see, his name used to be Icy, and his design is way different than the picture. Yeah, well, I changed this design. Plus his name. Icy is such a common name...besides, I like the name Glacier.
I created him a long time ago for Misty. I felt that my first fursona Misty needed someone to help her...someone to be at her side. And Glacier was just the cat/wolf I came up with.
Their anniversary isn't too long away! C:
So basically this picture is about when he first saw Misty...and he knew it was love.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

OK. Let's start with the top cat.
And Ill form my critiques more easily so its more symmetrical <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
Head: Nice, Its pretty nicely shaped, and the ears don't look like potato chips ^^ WEWT The nose is still too big :T Good job getting the mouth smaller. The eyes...are a bit too squically...like this ~.

Body: Nice except the hind legs look AWKWARD D8. They look like golf clubs. When a cat sits down their feet are either infrount of the middle of the leg, not to the side, thats not the way their antonym works = /. The tail looks to skinny ;n; And I wont talk about the wings because I have no clue xD

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Head: Boot-i-ful, a bit too large. One of the ears is crooked >:C -spazzes- Your ears need to be curved and straight if that makes anysense. Look at mine or Neon's for an example owo
The nose is good, along with the mouth. Like I said before the eyes could be straighter...

Body: I cant see much of it...so. Yeah. It looks good from my angle xD